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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 6, 2009 15:39:53 GMT -5
Hey Colt, I copy/pasted the parts of teh story I had written for you, just let me know what you think.
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 7, 2009 14:28:54 GMT -5
I'm still making progress on the story guys. I did a lot of editing until 4 am. I'm kinda laggy on editing and writing since I'm looking for a job and working on a model kit for a competition...but that doesn't have to be done for a while. I'm trying to get as much as this done before I get a job.
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Post by HunterColt22 on Mar 8, 2009 0:22:28 GMT -5
Saw and read through it briefly. Will read through it again, but it looked all right to me. I'll let you know later.
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 8, 2009 22:40:10 GMT -5
I talked to Kenshin today on msn, he's going to get me some reference images for his character. If anyone else wants to make the character design process easier on me bu supplying other reference images, I'd really appreciate it. Even if it's something simple like a dagger, a sheath, shoes etc. If you can find a video of something on youtube, pause it and printscreen the image, I don't care. I do that a lot actually. I also use a lot of mangas and images from Wikipedia for referencing.
And ya know, using SC3's character creator would be a good idea, they have TONS of clothes and the such. So does 4, but you can't unlock a lot of it unless you Ascend/Descend the Tower of Lost Souls or whatever, which is a GIANT pain in the arse. So yeah.
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 12, 2009 22:13:04 GMT -5
I've gotten a lot of editing done lately. I've cut a few tiny parts out that were more convenient than supporting to the story and reworded several paragraphs.
I'm still waiting for Kenshin to get back to me on his characters design and waiting for Colt to confirm the story parts I sent him.
Hey Shinjo, after I get through editing this, would you mind looking it over for me? You're like, an infinitely better writer than I am, and some parts seem kinda bland to me.
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Post by mag on Mar 13, 2009 2:25:37 GMT -5
-.-
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 13, 2009 3:30:01 GMT -5
Eh? What's that all about?
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Post by mag on Mar 13, 2009 12:34:56 GMT -5
=^_^=
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Post by Dragin "Hiku" Hikari on Mar 13, 2009 22:00:03 GMT -5
Okay, that emoticon is freaky coming from you XD
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 13, 2009 23:38:39 GMT -5
lol srsly.
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Post by mag on Mar 14, 2009 1:56:41 GMT -5
meow =^_^=
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 16, 2009 23:56:58 GMT -5
I was sick over the weekend, so no story work for me.
*is still waiting for Colt and Ken*
^___^
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Post by Dragin "Hiku" Hikari on Mar 18, 2009 12:39:00 GMT -5
I was sick over the weekend, so no story work for me. *is still waiting for Colt and Ken* ^___^ Probably be waiting while then
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Post by HunterColt22 on Mar 18, 2009 20:40:27 GMT -5
Hey sorry about that, had a lot of stuff go on this past few weeks. Anyway the last bit is all right, I never really thought that the character would ever really get that close and have a kid, I was thinking it would take a lot of time for him to trust some one fully. colt personally has trust issues that he wouldn't get over very soon. However you can place a spin on it, and allow him to start to care for people a lot more, such as treating your characters as actual friends or family. Other then that it worked wonders for me, I just find it really odd in the direction the character was going and at the speed he was, that while he might at some point, I dont think it would be by the end of this story that he would have fully trusted some one enough to have a kid, oh and also defenitly not the type of person to randomly sleep with some one just to scratch the itch. Heh sorry lots of random things have been happening this week and the past few so, its been a bit of a hectic thing to try and get everything straight. Hope this helps, sorry pho, dont stab me please! *Flees before blades are thrown his way.*
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Post by seraph_phoenix on Mar 19, 2009 0:34:15 GMT -5
lol if you read what Colt says to the woman in his home town in the end, the events with that girl took place a while *before* he met up with the other main characters. He insinuates that he did care for her, but left in order to seek answers about his race, etc.
Like I said, it's not fully written, just kinda a rough draft that I'll be adding a lot of context to later.
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